“What dost thou strike at, Marcus, with thy knife?”
“At that that I have killed, my lord, a fly.”
“Out on thee, murderer! Thou killst my heart.”

— William Shakespeare, Titus Andronicus


You ever get the feeling someone is talking about you?

I’m right at the end of the movie when the speaker starts popping and I hear these words. Once a week, right when I’m finally starting to relax around this spiderweb of power cords and surge protectors, I’m reminded I can never trust the wiring around here. Never move somewhere just because you like seeing a river out your window.

I remember when a nearby lightning strike fried something inside the picture tube and put a freaky green line through the middle of the screen. That green line was there for about six months, mercifully getting smaller and smaller and almost fading away until it was just a glowing yellow smear in the corner of the TV, like I’d smashed a lightning bug on the glass and never cleaned it up. I don’t know if this room is some sort of electric Bermuda Triangle, but I can’t risk any more equipment and that’s why I move fast whenever I hear a speaker snap, crackle or pop.

I’m ready to pull the plug when suddenly I’m hearing two voices from the speaker that aren’t part of the movie. I know this because the movie was at the end, right at the part where everyone gets what they deserve, and all I should be hearing is gunfire, one-liners and big, dumb music. However, this whispered conversation is something you’d hear in the middle of a flick, maybe the beginning, when you’re not sure what the characters are really up to and you’re supposed to be all suspicious of everyone.

The sad thing is he has no idea I hate his guts.

I sit down by the speaker, actually thinking about getting a glass to put between the television and my ear to hear the voices better.

Remember his last story? Even the goddamn dog was rolling his eyes.

I adjust my legs to get comfortable, hoping the reception lasts a while. I know “hearing voices” is supposed to make you nervous, but it happens in this building sometimes. A couple times, a year back, when my surround-sound speakers were still working, I picked up some random banter between truckers. It’s the bad wiring that does it. Sometimes, you’ll suddenly get three more people in the middle of your phone call, and you’ll find yourself answering a question about the first time you stuck a finger up someone’s ass instead of answering your grandpa’s question about car insurance.

But those fractured conversations lasted a minute at the most, and they were nowhere near as clear as this. This is like I’m holding the tomato cans between two people, but their string’s coming out both my ears.

If that bastard had any idea what people say…

Right then, the speaker crackles and the voices are buried under static. I lean in closer and bang my head on the glass. There’s a final POP! and I yank the cord from the wall. I sit with my back to the TV, feeling the electricity tickle my neck as both me and the equipment power down. I reel in the cord, wrapping it around my knuckles, working to bend the prongs straight.

I hold my breath when I plug it back in. Thank Christ it still works. I stare at the green stain in the corner of the picture. It’s back, but it doesn’t bother me. I’d watch TV if the whole screen was green. Nothing happens in the corners of a movie anyway. A green sunset in this western? The gunfighters won’t even notice.

00:00:03:57 - love without a life jacket

When I say there’s a long list of things about her that used to drive me nuts, I’m not talking about a sheet of paper, or even a stack of paper with both sides filled plus illustrations in the margin and a flip-cartoon in the corner to re-enact the top ten, I’m talking about the kind of list where you could stand at the top of the stairs and you let the pages drop and they bounce down the steps and unroll out the door and down the hill and across the street and over the cars and stray dogs are crashing through it like a finish line. That’s how long my list is. And at the top of that list? That would have to be the way she used to walk into the bathroom to use the phone. It drove me crazy. Well, crazy enough to ruin my day. Luckily, that’s one thing I don’t have to worry about anymore. This new girl I got? She stares right at me when she’s on the phone. She let’s me listen to the even her most embarrassing conversations. She’s never turning the volume down on the receiver in case the caller says something I shouldn’t hear. She’s never pressing the phone hard against her head, so afraid a secret would sneak out while she was talking. So hard her ear looks like a ripe tomato slice when she finally snaps the phone shut.

This new girl? She’s got nothing to hide. She’s in the bathroom right now, and I trust her so much I’m not even turning down the volume to listen to her piss.

Then the toilet flushes once, twice, and chokes on a third attempt. She walks back into the room, then slides down to her hip in a quick motion that would make any gunfighter shake in his boots. My smile slips when I see her phone drop into her pocket.

“I thought you drowned,” I tell her.

00:00:28:09 - bugs can’t use tools

It’s too cold to have a fly on the window, on either side of the glass. There’s no leaves on trees. The birds are long gone. The morning before, I had to dig my car out from under the wake of a snowplow with red fingers. There’s nothing alive outside without fur, nothing alive out there smaller than a rat. But there it is.

One of those big, blue-eyed garbage flies, crawling around the edges of the glass like it was summer out there, like there isn’t a kid kicking the head off a snowman two houses down. In a daze, I pull the black tape off the window, taking some of the paint with it, knowing it’s going to take another hour to seal that window back up. I yank it up with a grunt, cold air freezing the snot in my nose. It’s the first time I’ve ever seen a fly trying to get in instead of out.

What the hell do you feed it? Usually, you’re trying to stop a fly from drinking off the edge of your pop can instead of keeping it alive. So I just stand back and let it ricochet off the walls like a drunk hoping it’ll find a stray cornflake or damp toenail to munch on. I watch it circle the room about six more times, increasingly confused by its behavior, cruising frantic figure-eights about a foot from the ceiling. Finally, I grab a stuffed animal still upside down in a corner from three ex-girlfriend’s ago and chase it toward the bathroom. If I’m going to have a pet fly it should be near the bowl, right? I mean, I’m a pretty clean dude, but I figure if there’s anything around this place a fly can eat, it’s going to be in there. Hell, cats and dogs get water bowls, don’t they? I should write the name “Spike” on the side of my toilet.

00:00:42:31 - am I gonna eat what exactly?

The next day, this new girl comes over to watch a movie. Halfway through, the speakers start popping again, and while I’m screwing with the wires in the back of the box, she sighs and runs to the bathroom. And suddenly, I’m listening to her piss even though she’s 100 feet and a closed door away. It’s splashing so loud I flinch and think she squatted down over my head.

That’s when I remember the fly.

Same old shit, you know? Why do I come over here?

The voice is fading, so I crawl over to my bookbag and pull out my headphones. I quickly try plugging the headphones directly into the TV and I get zapped with static instead. Like a fool I sit there, with the headphones unplugged and dangling, still listening for the voices. The headphones are new. They’re the kind that go into your ears instead of over them, sometimes too deep, the kind that you might lose in your head if you scratch too hard. Like I do. And just like they always told me would happen when people are talking shit, my ears start burning.

I have to go watch the rest of this horrible movie, if he ever gets it to work…

I’m so excited about hearing someone’s voice through unplugged headphones that, at first, I don’t care what she’s saying. It’s not like the truckers I heard before. This time I can only hear one side of the conversation. Her voice is a non-stop sigh, like the endless hiss of a tire valve.

Maybe I’ll pretend I’m sick.

Then the toilet flushes, and it’s as loud as a hurricane. I grab the sides of the TV in case I start spinning around a drain and get sucked down. I’m so wired about this discovery that I’m smiling like a maniac when she comes out, struggling to keep my new eavesdropping skills to myself. By the time we finish the western, I realize it’s not just the headphones. The fly was in there with her.

…the first time I’ve ever seen a fly trying to get in instead of out…

This new power is coming from the fly.

00:01:34:07 - spiders are not our friends

After she’s gone home, I’m thinking I should call NASA or whatever government office deals with the physical manifestation of metaphors. Or, at the very least, spy on about ten more people I suspect are talking shit about me. I’m already making a mental list when I go back into the bathroom.

The fly is dying. At least, it’s moving slower. My eyes follow its sluggish path until it vanishes into a crack in the porcelain box behind the toilet. I panic and shove the clock radio and empty box of tissues onto the floor and take off the lid, shaking my head in disbelief as I look inside. Impossible.

The fly is caught in a spiderweb, flailing like a drunk trying to navigate a beaded curtains at a party. Spiders in the toilets? Flies in the snow? What’s next?

Suddenly, I know what to do. I tie it outside the bathroom window, and, just as I hoped, the cold air seems to revive it. It’s moving fast again, but it never gets back to full speed. It’s not going to last much longer. I check the clock radio on the bathroom floor to try and estimate how much time the fly has left. The display is flashing a green “12:00 a.m.” since I never figured out how to set it. Now, I’ve got two problems. A time limit, I’m not good with math, and I can’t get everyone into my bathroom to spy on them.

Staring at the word “Spike” on the bowl, I decide I should take my fly for a walk.

Once, my grandpa told me he used to stick flies to his fingers with honey when he was a boy.

“We were bored as hell back then,” he said, “Now, don’t think I’m reminiscing so I can tell you how it built character or any noble shit like that ‘cause the only thing playing with flies does is make you wish you had toys instead.”

He told me his flies didn’t fly too long because he always smacked them just a little bit too hard to slow them down, sort of like my grandma.

Well, mine won’t last long either. I have to move faster than I am.

I look around the bathroom, find some dental floss the last girl left behind.

I have no trouble grabbing it out of the air, and it’s still sluggish enough to tie a leash around its body without risking a swat to stun it, but the floss is too thick for a knot. I look around and around and around, and finally my eyes stop on the answer stuck to the side of my toilet, underlining my pet fly’s name. I crouch down to get closer.

All this time I thought it was a crack in the porcelain but it’s a long black hair stuck to the moisture on the side of the bowl. I peel it loose and hold it up to the window. Black. One of hers. I half-expect it to twitch like a severed spider’s leg. And even though it’s just a hair, even though I haven’t cleaned the bathroom since she left, I’m still amazed to find a piece of her still here. I’d be less surprised to find a five-foot-five layer of skin she’d shed, rustling and drying in a corner.

I tie the leash quick. Too easily. I decide it’s because I had one of my hands buried in her hair for so many years that, when they’re not connected to her head anymore, they still know my fingers and sometimes I can still get them to do what I want.

The fly grabs her hair and starts stroking it with two front legs. Does that damn thing have thumbs? Impossible. If bugs had tiny thumbs, they would have already invented the tiny wheel.

I tie it to my finger where the skin is still white from the ring she gave me. Then I put on headphones plugged into nothing, a power cord dangling down and tucked into a belt-loop. I start my day.

00:01:09:13 - bringing a fly to a fist fight

I’m out the door looking at my watch, and I see it’s time for free doughnuts. The gas station makes new ones and throws out the old ones at exactly 8:00 every day. They’re always real cool about giving me those old ones, but you got to time it just right. The fly tugs on its leash, circling my ring finger, then resigning to wrap itself around the steering wheel. I worry about a sudden turn breaking the leash, so I pull over and carefully unwind the hair without breaking it, thinking about the old westerns my grandpa used to make us watch, and the way the cowboys made their horse stay put by dropping a leather strap across a bush or twig without even tying it up or anything.

Inside the gas station, the girl behind the counter smiles, and I grab one of each kind of doughnut before the kid can slide them into the trash. He sighs and waits for me to drop them into my bag, then he quickly clears the case. I take longer than usual because I’m trying to keep one hand behind my back. I don’t know what would be worse, someone thinking that flies follow me around, or someone seeing that I keep one a tiny little leash.

When she’s counting the cigarettes behind her, I tie the fly to a bag of peanuts near the cash register, not really tying a knot, just winding the hair around the peanuts one time, then I run out to pump my gas.

Inside, I see the girl at the counter talking to the next guy in line and he throws a thumb my way. I quickly pull the headphones from inside my shirt and pop them in to see if this guy is talking shit. Amazingly, he isn’t. But she is.

He just tries to act like he had no idea they were free even though he was in here last night…

My head down, I run in and grab my fly. For the first time since I started going there, she talks to me.

“You paying for those peanuts, asshole?”

 

I stop at the post office and check the stamp machines in the lobby. Just as I hoped, there’s a wagging tongue of five three-cent stamps sticking out. I tear them free and put them in my pocket. Ever since the price of stamps went up, people usually leave the difference behind.

The girl behind the counter smiles and waves as I leave.

He doesn’t have three cents?

What the hell? I scratch my ears hard to see if the voice goes away. If I could scratch my ears with my foot, I would. I don’t understand. The headphones are around my wrist. The fly isn’t anywhere near her. And neither am I.

I go to the diner. Are there girls behind every counter? Do they grow them back there, just out of sight? Are there ten more girls behind the counters you can’t see yet only because they haven’t grown high enough for their heads to clear the register?

A girl with the pencil shaped like a tiny pool cue. I stare at it, hypnotized, every time she takes my order. I asked her about it once, but she ignored me. Tonight is no different.

“Waitress, there is a fly in my soup…”

She looks down at the fly tugging against its leash on my finger.

“…and I think the little bastard just lassoed me.”

She wanders away, a miraculous combination of expressions on her face that I didn’t think were possible.

I stop in the restroom on the way out. In the urinal, just above the line-of-fire, there’s a sticker that declares: “You hold in your hand the power to stop a rape!”

For a second I think the sign refers to the fly crawling across my knuckles, and I’m suddenly ashamed. Is it so wrong to be “the fly whisperer?”

When I’m zipping up, one headphone falls from my left ear and plops into the urinal. I sigh, pull the rest of the wires out of my shirt and toss them all in.

I stop at the garage to get air for my tires. It’s the only place in town where you don’t have to pay fifty cents to do this. The guy who owns the garage gives me a knowing smile and a wave. I wave back and accidentally bounce my fly off my forehead. He’s cool. Last time I was there he agreed with me that paying for air is “freaking ridiculous.”

I get out, tie the fly to the compressor, snake the hose, hit the button.

How fucking low do you have to be to steal air…c’mon.

Was that a girl’s voice? I thought it was all guys in that garage. A girl from one of my earlier stops? What kind of reception does this fly get, anyway?

I heard of someone stealing dirt once, only that was from a construction site and that shit ain’t cheap. But air? Nope. Never heard of anyone stealing air.

The compressor stops rumbling. My fly strains on its leash, then curls back to land on a coil of hose.

I’ve heard of people stealing water once, but that was during the war.

I throw the hose. 29 pounds will have to do.

Honestly, who the hell steals air…

I can’t contain my rage any longer. I yell at the shadows in the garage.

“Who the hell sells air?!”

Two mechanics slides out from under a cars and into the sunlight. They stand up and walk toward me, wiping grease from their fists, blowing sweat off their noses, staring at me like I’m nuts.

00:01:45:22 - fly factory revealed

Do you ever get the feeling someone is talking shit about you?

I stop at the video store to steal some DVD inserts. I do this because they really are good reading. Sure, sometimes you get a paragraph of summary or some decent production notes or an interview, but that’s not what I’m looking for. I steal the inserts because I like to read the chapter titles. It’s like a whole movie in ten seconds. The chapter titles tell you all you need to know.

I grab a random one to prove my point. Okay, not so random:

Sharks With Guns

1. Love on a lifeboat
2. Sharks can’t use tools
3. Are you gonna eat that?
4. Dolphins are not our friends!
5. Bringing a shark to a gun fight
6. Shark factory revealed!
7. Duel to the deaf
8. Quitting the Coast Guard

See? What are you missing from the story after you read that? It’s all there. The crisis, the love interest, the surprise ending. Didn’t someone once say there are really only three stories you can tell? A stranger comes to town, and a man goes on a journey? Man sort of talks to fly?

I study the box to the movie and snicker, as there’s no way that shark could hold that chainsaw, much less a gun. They don’t have any thumbs.

Now, that would be a scary movie. If they had thumbs, they could make a phone call. It wouldn’t have to bite anyone. Just show one shark whip out a phone and every asshole in the audience would start screaming their head off.

Could happen. I’ve seen more far-fetched things than that in a movie. One time, in the bathtub, my ex-girlfriend checked her phone underwater so I couldn’t see who called her. I figured she’d ruined it, but it turned out the phone worked fine when I blew the bubbles off of it later that night to check that number she was hiding.

I slip some DVD booklets into my sleeves then go up to the counter and grab one of those free internet CDs. She is up there, and I see a strange light flickering in her eyes, and I realize the girl is watching something under the register with the volume turned down. When did she sneak a TV in here?

Suddenly I have to know what movie she’s watching. Is she watching something she’s not supposed to? Why else would she have the volume down like that?

On the way out, I finally see what it is. A security monitor. She was watching me steal those inserts the entire time. I can see myself in the corner of her screen, standing by the door, hunched and alone, looking over her shoulder, guilty as hell, green as the sunset.

Sitting in the car with my hands on the steering wheel my heart jumps. The fly is dangling on the hair like a suicide. I turn on the air-conditioning, open all the vents, and hold it in front of the cold air. It starts to climb back up its leash like a spider. It’s moving slow, but it’s still alive. I realize that every time I hide the fly, it starts to die.

Sounds like a children’s rhyme, doesn’t it?

I have to get home. Or get it to the bathroom. Or a restroom. You ever notice how cold the water in a toilet is? Even on the hottest day? Even if you know what’s been in there, it’s got to be tempting to swim in it. For a bug, I mean.

I drive fast, checking the size of the gas stations, trying to gauge whether they’re big enough for a public toilet. I glance down at the fly and see it slump on the string and swing from the hair like a pendulum. I slam on the brakes and make a hard right into the smallest gas station I’ve ever seen.

I ask the third-grader behind the counter if they have a restroom. He says no and turns back to counting the candy bars. In desperation, I hold up my hand with the limp fly swinging from my finger.

“Dude, my fly needs to drink from a toilet fast or it’s going to die.”

The kid smiles over a huge piece of gum and stares at me for 13…14…15 seconds. Then he points to the door behind the beer. “Hurry up.”

Unfuckingbelievable. Guess he’s seen stranger things than this.

Inside the bathroom, I’m assaulted by a stench worse than any outhouse. I walk over to the toilet and cautiously lift the lid. The water is clear as a mountain spring. I carefully lower my hand until the fly’s head just breaks the surface. I think about the part of the buddy-cop movie right around the second act where the drunk partner has to get revived by the wise-cracking partner, who shoves his face in the toilet. I’m much more gentle than that.

And it works. The fly starts to activate, cranking its legs over its head to clean itself off. I smile. It looks like it’s playing a tiny air guitar. No, it would need thumbs to do that.

Back in the car, I wonder how many people would believe I’m actually worried about this fly. I try to imagine myself in the waiting room at the veterinarian. I’d be the only person that a kid with a sick hermit crab could feel good laughing at. I watch it perched on the radio knob, cleaning its wings.

I’ve spent more time worrying about this fly than I worried about my ex-girlfriend. Even when she had to get her appendix out. I mess with my stereo.

Equalizer. That’s a good word.

Suddenly I understand something. It just seems like I care about the fly more than her, but if you were to line them up against the wall and put a little pencil mark over their heads, you’d find that actually my feelings about the fly and her are exactly the same. And it’s not that I think more of a fly. It’s just that, the more I find out about human beings, and the more I listen to their voices when they don’t think anyone can hear, the less I think of them.

00:01:58:19 - ears are burning

One time I told her I was going to invent a phone that, instead of ringing, released a swarm of bees instead. I said it would guarantee she would answer the thing every time I needed her to. She didn’t understand what the hell I was talking about. I think she thought I was talking about some special ringtone. I said, “okay, listen, how about just three small bees, just enough of a scare to buzz around your ears and make you swat the air in a panic every single time I called you?” She had no answer to that.

I walk out of the bathroom, and I see she was reading that same magazine again, the one with the prescription label with my ex-girlfriend’s name on it. I even told her how she used to snort painkillers off those very same pages. You’d think that alone would make her not want to read it. I used to try to get a letter published in one of her magazines so she’d stumble across my name.

Wait, did I say “prescription” earlier? Because that is exactly what I meant.

The speaker suddenly starts popping again.

Shit fuck shit. I pull the cords on everything. I hate the wiring in this house. It eventually destroys everything. I hear water running in the sink, and I figure she’s going to be in there awhile. She does that sometimes. Runs the sink so I can’t hear. Like I’m really listening to hear her pissing. Suddenly I remember something, and I quickly crawl to my box of old cassette tapes rotting in the corner. It’s my worst, last pair of headphones. Huge ratty ones from the ‘80s that cover your entire friggin’ head. I hesitate to put them on. My headphones are getting bigger and bigger as I seem to be sliding further back down the headphone-evolutionary ladder. Once I’m holding them in my hands and blowing the dust and insect shells off the foam, I realize they’re older than I thought.

They’re from the ‘70s, not the ‘80s, and they’re the only thing left of my mom. One time, she came up to me and put these over my ears, and I was pouting about something, so I didn’t say anything, didn’t even look up, but I didn’t take them off my ears either. And I still can’t remember the song she wanted me to hear or why she wanted me to hear it. Maybe there was something funny in the song? Maybe the lyrics meant something to her? Maybe she thought it was my favorite band? I can’t remember. I was too busy ignoring her. And now, I’ll never know what it was because I just sat there, arms crossed, mad about something stupid I can’t remember, frowning until the song was over and she finally walked away.

The wind blows the dead fly around on its string. My ring finger is white from lack of circulation. I unwrap the leash from my skin, waiting for the blood flow to return and paint the white knuckle red again. I’m amazed at how strong her hair was.

The strange thing is, when I think back to it, I could have sworn I was outside, sitting with crossed legs and crossed arms under a tree when she walked up and put these over my ears. The cord couldn’t have reached that far, could it?

It’s true that the bathroom is the last place where the remains of a relationship will linger. Is it all those half-empty bottles and soaps. Or is it just hairs around the toilet?

00:02:00:07 - end credits and ironic theme music

The next day I finally take out the trash. Not a second too late, either. I can see a box of sweet-and-sour chicken moving down there, and suddenly that fly ain’t such a miracle anymore because I can see at least three more green-eyed flies bouncing around in the bag with their snouts dipping in and out of a month of our scraps. My grandpa used to say that tiny fish would appear in a mud puddle if it sits undisturbed long enough. Not true. Those were mosquitoes. You know how they say the bathroom is the last place your girlfriend exists? I meant the garbage.

I take out the trash. Then I keep walking past the dumpster to throw my headphones into the river before I change my mind.

It’s one of those rivers that looks good from a distance. Then you’re standing next to it and you catch a smell of what’s been dumped in there for years. Wasn’t this the river that caught on fire because of the pollution? You’d think my toilet would have ignited from all the cigarettes she flicked in it. Is this the river where that little boy swore he saw the shark?

The headphones bob along, riding the brown waves, then something under the water takes a couple bites and finally pulls them down. There’s a girl standing next to me when I turn around.

“You know what you looked like to me just then?” she asks. “You looked like the last scene of a movie. The part where the sheriff throws away his badge.”

“Hold out your hand,” I tell her, not expecting her to. When she uncurls her fingers for me, I expect something to fly away.

“What’s your name?”

“Michelle. But I go by ‘Chelle, ‘shell.’”

“Of course you do. I’ve seen you before, haven’t I?”

“I live in your building.”

“Have you ever had problems with your wiring?”

“No,” she laughs. “Have you?”

“All the time.”

“You should get a surge protector. Seriously. I have three of them.”

I stare for seven…eight…nine seconds. Then I write my phone number in her hand. Just for laughs I draw a fly underneath it.

“Sorry, I like drawing flies.”

“I know. They’re easy to make. Like a smiley face. You know why everyone draws smiley faces? Because there are less than five lines you need before you can recognize it.”

“I believe it.”

I hear the buzzing sound again, and I know what it is before she even pulls it out. She smiles an apology and presses the phone deep into her face, quickly walking away before she starts talking.

I walk off in the opposite direction to give her some privacy. I think of my phone number and the fly I drew on her skin, and I cup my hand around my ear like a seashell. Even when she’s miles away, even when her head and her hand are the only things visible above the waves smacking my head and filling my nostrils, I still keep my hand over my ear, and I can still hear every word of her conversation like she’s swimming right next to me. Until I pull her under.

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Shark With Thumbs by David James Keaton
originally published October 14, 2009

 

 


David James Keaton is currently in the MFA program at the University of Pittsburgh and a full-time closed-captioner. He is also a contributor to The College Rag and a reader for Hot Metal Bridge.

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